Unorthodox

[danielle]

Unorthodox

Rating: NSFW, Seriously Explicit - more so than I Found Love.

Summary: Takes place during Anakin's trials, as he has to undertake an unusual ritural, which necessitates Obi-Wan having to ask a favour of Padmé. Her descision leads to some interesting consequences. More explained during the first part of the story and before part two. This story has three parts and there is a choice of plot for the second, which might prove difficult reading. It has worried me whether to put this out there ever since it first started haunting my mind - which was some years ago and until now I haven't been able to write it in a way that I was with it. Now that's its done, I worry how others will receive it, or if I'm worrying too much and over hyping it.

With that in mind, go forth and read.

Please leave feedback by replying to this thread.

[NoobianRose]

Danielle! I don't know what you were worried about! I thought this was great! Though, I must admit, you already had me when I read that it was "NSFW." lol. I thought the concept was really good and I liked that it sort of became a "chose your own adventure story"! I loved how their physical intimacy gradually brought their true feelings to the surface. I liked the pacing and I think your characterizations (as always) were spot on!

I'm glad that you gave this story a shot, even though you were worried about it. I really enjoyed the read!

[danielle]

Thanks Rosalie, I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm pleased you liked it so much, I actually wrote this in one sitting, after how long its been in my head, I surprised how easily it came out on to the screen. I'm relieved that I was worrying too much, its something I've never written before, which is probably why.

*Hugs*

[obigirl]

What an interesting and unique story the FIRST story I've ever read when I've had options - confession I actually read both haha couldn't resist this was so cleverly written I love this well done!!

[danielle]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.