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Post by kenobifan on Jun 10, 2007 5:36:33 GMT -4
Alice Kenobi was kind enough to allow us to premiere her new story, "To Ignite the Stars". Let's give her our support by leaving a comment or two.
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Post by kenobifan on Jun 10, 2007 11:26:20 GMT -4
I skimmed through this last night, when I was posting it.. I will have to come back and review....and I will! I have to leave here shortly, but I shall return. This story has the Ladybug Seal of Approval... WOOHOO!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 10, 2007 13:17:20 GMT -4
Ok...TBC? How about...now?! LoL. This is a great fic and I can't wait to read more.
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Post by Erika on Jun 10, 2007 13:18:39 GMT -4
Wow, this story is wonderful! I absolutely love it, and was crestfallen to see that there was not another chapter to continue reading! I love your way of writing and how you portray their emotions and everything, and along with Padmé, or Obi-Wan feeling sad, I felt sad as well. I can't help it, I can just FEEl their emotions and their thoughts! Wonderful job, thus far!
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Post by kenobifan on Jun 10, 2007 16:15:50 GMT -4
See? I knew it.. I just knew it. They would of kept in contact with each other after battle. I know that Padme would of been there for Obi-Wan. Padme caught her breath. She was sweating, her chest heaving, brush stationary in her hair. Had she really just gone that deeply into an intimate fantasy about Obi-Wan? I think we can all relate to that... And now it's Obi-Wan's turn to comfort Padme. *sigh* This is just a wonderful start.... I enjoyed reading all the different twists.. and could see this happening...
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Post by admin on Jun 10, 2007 16:21:18 GMT -4
Will you be continuing this on your LJ? Quite interesting, and I too snag that one line Padme says in AOTC - "..you'll always be that little boy I knew from Tatooine."
THAT right there is one of my favorite Padme lines to whittle Anakin and his immature crush down to size. It reveals Padme's obvious maturity and incompatibility to Anakin. And then the look of horror she has on her face as Anakin talks back to his Master and argues with him in front of her.....Obidala-priceless.
But I digress....
Great start to this fic. I'll be looking for the rest of it.
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 10, 2007 16:24:53 GMT -4
You have a beautiful handle on the characters, all of them (even Anakin). You have a simple and beautiful way of writing that is exciting, intersting, and romantic. I can't wait to read more!!! You must hurry and write!! More . . . now . . . please??
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Post by Idrial Nëume on Jun 10, 2007 18:10:01 GMT -4
I loved the fic! It was written beautifully and I especially liked how you delved in Padme and Obi-wan's feelings. I can't wait for the next part!!!
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Post by Liz Kenobi on Jun 10, 2007 19:11:55 GMT -4
Wow, thanks so much for all the great reviews, guys! I honestly didn't expect "To Ignite the Stars" to receive such a reception, I'm so glad you guys liked! Colour me VERY flattered and touched. I expect to have Chapters 3 and 4 up in time for tomorrow's celebrations, and will be continuing the fic in my LJ after the second anniversary celebrations close. Everyone is more than welcome to come over and read. Thanks again, you guys are awesome!
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Post by kenobifan on Jun 13, 2007 2:24:36 GMT -4
Just to let you know... Alice updated this wonderful story..... I know, I'm probably speaking out of turn here, and I will remind her to post a thread and let us know of her updates, if that's what she wants to do... I'm kind of in a mood, so I'm going to say this .....as nice as I can. We honestly need to start supporting each other, by leaving reviews for ALL our authors. We are a family, an Obidala family, and well, that's what family does, "SUPPORT" each other. It doesn't have to be much, a note saying " I liked it" would suffice. So what do you say, my fine young padawans? A lesson to be learned here? A Jedi lesson? Make Obi-Wan proud? The third chapter is located on Live Journal. Here's the link to the next chapter of "To Ignite the Stars". senatorsfan-ink.livejournal.com/9280.html?view=24896#t24896
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Post by spirithp on Jun 13, 2007 12:37:44 GMT -4
Honestly? I swear to the Gods of Star Wars I posted a review! I don't remember what it said....but I'll write a new one! Chapter one made me tear up. I don't know what it is about the whole father/son obi/qui thing that always gets me, but you really hit it! Chapter 2....Anakin, Anakin, Anakin! Annoying little....you're very good at writing him in character, going to Padme's door but having nothing to say. I'm glad you're using the original dialouge but changing parts, I love stories like that. Fantasies that will soon be made real, I hope! Chapter 3, best yet! Whinakin being whinny, Padme thinking of Obi-Wan and Obi-Wan hugging Padme. The way things should be! I'm very curious to see what that letter says, and I pray to the gods it's got the words 'I love you' in it! I can't wait to see how Padme fights off Anakin once they get to Naboo! Maybe she'll throw him in the lake Keep those chapters coming!
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