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Post by danielle on Jun 18, 2020 7:21:06 GMT -4
by Noobian Rose
Rating: Probably PG Pairing: Obidala (friendship and perhaps a tad of romance) Summary: A story expanding upon one of the earliest official imaginings of the scene on the Mustafar landing platform at the end of Episode III.
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Post by Briseis on Jun 22, 2020 19:36:59 GMT -4
OMG SHE SURVIVED... *screeches*
I was so sure sure she died, what with Obi-Wan's reaction. That killed me. But she lives!! *cheers*
This is so good sweetie <3 The angst was killing me but ooh, that original outline of Padmé attempting to off Anakin to save the Republic, I don't think I've actually read that in a fic. You are amazing, I LOVE your style of writing. My emotions were all over the place here! Love it!
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Post by obigirl on Jun 23, 2020 7:01:37 GMT -4
*takes a sigh of relief*
SHE LIVES!!!
btw NICE idea with the idea of her going to Mustafar to kill Anakin and then twist of him suspecting it {I thought I'd only read that in the behind the scenes of episode 3 book} this as brillant!!! amazing work!!
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 24, 2020 17:45:35 GMT -4
Thank you, guys! This was the first major story I'd written in a while, so those muscles felt really rusty. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And I'm glad you enjoyed the twist. I really wanted that sigh of relief moment at the very end.  As for the premise, I think it came out a few years ago that Padme going to kill Anakin herself was actually one of the first imaginings of the scene, is that what you're talking about, Lauren? And I think Danielle also took a pass at imagining this scene, perhaps for the last celebration? Can't quite remember. Great minds think alike, though!  |
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