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Post by danielle on May 26, 2018 2:37:32 GMT -4
Please post your feedback here by replying to this thread.
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Post by NoobianRose on May 27, 2018 18:31:31 GMT -4
Beautiful and heart-wrenching. I love the detail in your prose, describing how broken they both are -- physically and emotionally -- after the fall of the Republic. It's going to take a long long time for these two to find themselves on the same page. Which feels perfect.
A wonderful story!
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Post by obigirl on May 28, 2018 6:08:57 GMT -4
WOW just WOW!!! amazing and beautiful!! it shows their thoughts on the end of the republic and all their scars they feel just wonderful!!
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