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Post by danielle on Jun 26, 2015 2:55:17 GMT -4
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Post by obigirl on Jun 27, 2015 4:32:02 GMT -4
HA HA OMG I LOVE THAT!!! THAT WAS beautiful, hilarious and brillant!! Anakin going through all of Obi Wan's love's pricelss and then Padme and Obi Wan together so sweet and that ending HA!!!!
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Post by Kate on Jun 27, 2015 4:52:03 GMT -4
Very funny and romantic! I loved the dynamic between Obi-Wan and Padmé in this piece, it really brought a smile to my face. And Anakin was a pretty funny drunk here as well, that had me laughing. : P
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Post by danielle on Jun 27, 2015 6:19:32 GMT -4
Very amusing, and so sweat! I really enjoyed reading that, it brought such a smile to my face.
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 27, 2015 15:29:23 GMT -4
This is a beautiful story -- heartwarming, romantic, and quite funny! The dialogue was so good, characterizations spot-on. I particularly loved what Obi-Wan says right before he kisses her. It felt so true to him. "Forgive me for what I'm about to do..."I very much enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with us!  |
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Post by Aravyn Kenobi on Jun 27, 2015 16:54:03 GMT -4
That was so sweet! And it had a great dose of humor. Anakin's teasing literally made me laugh out loud, even though I felt sorry for Obi-Wan.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2015 21:26:33 GMT -4
Hahaha!! I haven't laughed that hard in a long time
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Post by Briseis on Jun 28, 2015 15:13:34 GMT -4
This is FANTASTIC!! I giggled so much when Anakin was teasing Obi, of course, everybody loves him!  And I loved the dynamic between he and Padmé. It was really beautiful, I loved it. |
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Post by misschris on Jun 29, 2015 10:20:08 GMT -4
Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement, so glad you guys enjoyed it. It's my first fic that I've managed to finish (quite a few on the go) and I was so happy I was able to complete it in time (just) for this!
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And I loved the dynamic between he and Padmé. It was really beautiful, I loved it. 
