The Genosian Menagerie by Rosalie

[danielle]

Please click the link to read the second part of the story and give your feedback by replying to this thread.

Rating: M, Adult, NSFW, bordering on PWP

The Geonosian Menagerie

[danielle]

There is so much that I love about this story. You write their intimacy so well, its simply beautiful and hot - *waves fan*. The aftermath as well, Anakin thinking of himself, she and Obi-Wan thinking of the war, how much their time together changed them, the possibilities of the Future. I love the detail and emotion, both spoken and unspoken. Gorgeous, masterful, I cannot praise this enough.

[Kate]

Yep, I think I may need to steal Danielle's fan. : P Very hot indeed, and I love the way you portrayed their intimacy, it was very intense but also really tender. You can really feel how much they care about each other. And again, your writing is just flawless, it's a joy to read. Brilliant work!

[obigirl]

HA HA I have a fan and boy do i need it *fans self* that was so F***ING hot!!! the way you wrote the initmacy scenes there WAS WOW well written and amazing!!!

[NoobianRose]

Thank all of you so much. I so appreciate the feedback.

@ Danielle - The word "masterful" coming from you? Is more of a compliment than even the word itself. I consider you to be quite masterful with the written word, yourself. So hearing that you like my work so much really means a lot.

@ Kate - Well there's only one fan so . . . I can get you a hose though! Thank you, Kate. "Flawless"?? *blushes*

@ Lauren - I'll turn the hose on you next if you'd like! Thanks so much. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this!

[Briseis]

Well... lucky you did split it into parts, because if this was whole, I would have exploded. Give me your skills please! You are way too awesome and this is just incredible. SOOOOO HOT and I was so immersed in reading this, I couldn't look away. I loved how Obi-Wan was able to change Padmé's perception and entered her thoughts, and how their minds almost blurred. The whole thing is just amazing, my mind is not working properly right now, so I can't even think of what else to say *slaps forehead* Just know that you and this fic are made of all that is awesome.

[NoobianRose]

You're too sweet for words, Nat. Thank you for sticking with the story and reviewing. I'm glad you didn't explode! I appreciate hearing that you liked their minds merging. I wanted the experience to be more intimate for them than even physical intimacy.

Don't worry about your head, you're fine.

*HUGS*