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Post by danielle on Jun 26, 2015 2:47:18 GMT -4
Please click the link to read the story and give your feedback by replying to this thread. Rating: M, Adult, NSFW, bordering on PWP The Geonosian Menagerie
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Post by Kate on Jun 27, 2015 5:50:30 GMT -4
Very hot and very well-written! I wouldn't classify this as PWP at all, I think you've set up an excellent and very believable atmosphere. Great job, your writing is superb.
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Post by danielle on Jun 27, 2015 7:21:06 GMT -4
That moment when he is stroking her chin, beautifully written, so eloquently expressed. I love the detail, the way the reader is thrust into the scene, the way that Anakin is sent away, discarded, only important enough to fetch the Jedi. You wonder what he is thinking, how much he knows. Padmé and Obi-Wan's feelings too, the insight into their thoughts is incredible. I love this story, I look forward to reading part two tomorrow.
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Post by obigirl on Jun 27, 2015 8:30:24 GMT -4
WHOA BABY!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!! H-O-T!!!! sexy!!!!!
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 27, 2015 17:04:19 GMT -4
@ Kate - That is most kind of you. As Danielle could tell you, I was kinda worried that I wouldn't be able to pull this one off. But hearing that makes me feel a lot better. [And *blushes* at the word "superb"] @ Danielle - Thank you for your kind words and for your support on this story. And you've highlighted one of my favorite moment in this half. Not Anakin leaving (though I did need a quick way to get him out of there, haha). The moment when he touches her, really seeing her -- seeing her reaction to him -- for the first time. *sighs* And you're such a tease, you already know what happens! @ Lauren - LOL! Hehe. Excellent. Really glad you thought so. Just wait until you read the second part tomorrow.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2015 21:00:06 GMT -4
And now I have to wait until tomorrow for the finish?! This is cruel and unusual punishment! Great job! Can't wait for part two
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Post by Briseis on Jun 28, 2015 16:21:51 GMT -4
WHO GAVE YOU GUYS THE RIGHT TO END IT LIKE THAT??!! I was very excitedly scrolling down as I was reading and didn't even realise that I was nearing the end and then it stopped scrolling and I was like "WHAT THE HELL?!" That was so incredible Rosalie, I was completely drawn in. I loved that it's a similar premise to An Indecent Proposal, creepy!Dooku is creepy. And I think it's lovely that you dedicated it to Sir Christopher. Loooove this, and I cannot wait to read the second part!
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 16:46:38 GMT -4
@ Amelia and Nat: Haha! As for who gave us the right?? You did when you let me be admin! And then I gave Danielle the right when I said, "Maybe we should split it. Wouldn't that be evil?? Hehe." But seriously, thank you for the compliments. And yeah when I finished it reminded me of Indecent Proposal too. I hope it's not *too* much like it. :/
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Post by Briseis on Jun 28, 2015 18:17:27 GMT -4
Hahahaha ofc, we have only ourselves to blame. You two little evil geniuses! You are most welcome, I cannot wait to finish reading.
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 18:21:52 GMT -4
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Post by Briseis on Jun 28, 2015 18:27:35 GMT -4
(relying on Google for gifs) What is life??
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 18:33:12 GMT -4
That a philosophical question?? Life is, quite simply, Obidala smut!fics! [Cute Ewan is CUTE!!]
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Post by Briseis on Jun 28, 2015 18:40:25 GMT -4
Well, it was more like, "What is the state of my life because of hunting gifs?" Why can it not be easy? *wails* YAS!!
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