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Post by danielle on Jun 25, 2015 14:41:24 GMT -4
Please click the link to read this story and give your feedback to Lauren by repyling to this thread. I warn you now this has a cliffhanger ending. It is a sequel to Fighting For Love, which was posted during the Tournament Challnge. I am including a link to that as well, just in case you need to refresh your memory. Fighting For LoveFighting For the Future |
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Post by danielle on Jun 28, 2015 6:36:18 GMT -4
You left it there!
Intriguing continuation, I hope we get to see more of this soon.
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Post by Kate on Jun 28, 2015 7:29:55 GMT -4
Definitely a cliffhanger! Seems like everything that could possibly go wrong for Padmé has indeed happened. I'm curious to see how it will all be resolved!
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 17:12:52 GMT -4
Holy cow! Looks like I'm not the only one being evil with cliffhangers this weekend! Nicely done, Lauren. Star Wars fits so well into a kind of medieval setting and that's the tone I got reading this. Really ingenious. And I'm excited to see what happens next!  |
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Post by obigirl on Jun 29, 2015 6:03:31 GMT -4
Thank you all for the wonderful comments I will admit I didn't plan on having such a cliff hanger i was changing the story and I ran out of time with the collab parts i had to do but I am planning to write more of this story and this part and its sequel will be on my fanfiction account www.fanfiction.net/u/1528224/sexystarwarslover |
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Post by Briseis on Jun 29, 2015 15:59:42 GMT -4
Oooh way to leave us hanging like that! You lot and your cliffhangers *shakes fist* Why are you doing this to me? I want to know what happens next! Poor Padmé, she's losing everything she cares about  I hate Palpatine so much! He needs to be destroyed! Fantastic work as always sweetie. |
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I hate Palpatine so much! He needs to be destroyed! Fantastic work as always sweetie. 