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Post by danielle on Jun 25, 2015 3:49:23 GMT -4
Please click the link to read the story and leave your feedback by replying to this thread. Whispers in the Wind |
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Post by danielle on Jun 28, 2015 6:35:34 GMT -4
Lovely, lovely story. So sweet their concern for each other and Republic. Beautiful.
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Post by obigirl on Jun 28, 2015 7:21:40 GMT -4
beautiful and touching love it well written and perfect
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Post by Kate on Jun 28, 2015 7:37:56 GMT -4
Very beautiful piece but somewhat sad near the end. I like how you kept in the tension because we don't know what's going to happen next, but at the same time managed to make it a sweet and romantic piece.
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 17:24:42 GMT -4
Such lovely, vivid imagery here, Takianna! I loved your descriptions of Padme waiting on her balcony -- the wind on her skin. Absolutely breathtaking. Wonderful work!
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Post by Briseis on Jun 29, 2015 16:38:19 GMT -4
Oh this is so stunning Takianna, really, really beautiful piece <3
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Post by takianna on Jul 1, 2015 8:44:12 GMT -4
Thanks everybody!
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