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Post by danielle on Jun 25, 2015 3:46:18 GMT -4
Please click the link to read the story and post your feedback by replying to this thread. Ten Years Later |
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Post by Kate on Jun 27, 2015 5:59:40 GMT -4
I love your characterization, I feel like you've really nailed the characters' emotions and behavior. I could totally see all of this happening. Really excellent read, thank you!
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Post by danielle on Jun 27, 2015 7:09:25 GMT -4
There is so much about this story that I love, the underlying emotions and thoughts they both feel, things they want to say and can't, the conversation they have before Anakin interrupts. The scene is described wonderfully, it captures everything, it is obidala and yet it works with canon too. Masterful.
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Post by obigirl on Jun 27, 2015 8:34:26 GMT -4
ooooh i really like this a story showing how they felt since TPM and meeting again in AOTC and love the change of Obi Wan and Anakin how Anakin was sent to talk with Captain Typho and Obi Wan went to see Padme and i sensed sparks love it!!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2015 16:08:32 GMT -4
Job so very well done. You have such an amazing understanding of how these characters tick and shines through brilliantly in your writing. I could see any of the scenes you written easily in any Star Wars film and believe it to be canon without a second though. Excellent as always, my friend!
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 27, 2015 16:31:16 GMT -4
What lovely compliments! Thank you all so very much. It means a lot to hear that many of you could see this story actually happening. I appreciate that because it's exactly what I was going for. And the unspoken. So much about this pairing is centered around things left unsaid. So I wanted to play a bit with inner-thoughts. Glad that came across. And the greatest compliment I could get is hearing that you feel the characterizations are right. That brings warm feelings to my heart.  |
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Post by Aravyn Kenobi on Jun 27, 2015 16:47:15 GMT -4
Oh, I loved this. It felt like a deleted scene. With much better dialogue. Wonderful story. The tension between the two was palpable, in my opinion. It was very sweet and a little sad all at once. Well done. |
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Post by kenobifan on Jun 28, 2015 5:36:27 GMT -4
It’s taking me a while to get my thoughts together because I am lying here with my arms crossed (Obi-Wan style) with a huge smile on my face after reading your lovely fic. Is this the end of the fic or is this to be continued?  You have always been able to write well thought out fics and go into the depths of the Obidala characters while conveying a true representation of our OTP. You have Obi-Wan and Padme figured out down to a “T,” and your process of writing this all down and presenting it to us is quite the masterful feat and indeed a welcome one. |
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 13:22:25 GMT -4
@ Mel - First of all *GLOMPS* Really lovely to see you. Second of all, thank you very much! I stress over getting dialog right so I'm really pleased you liked it. And we do loves our tension don't we??  @ Lynda - I appreciate that very much, my friend. You may have taken an Obidala hiatus, but there are few on planet Earth who know Obidala fanfiction better than you do. So a compliment like that? Is truly the highest praise. *hugs* |
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Post by Briseis on Jun 28, 2015 16:41:49 GMT -4
This is so beautiful Rosalie!! Your characterisation is spot-on as always, I'm always pulled deep into the story and I wish that there could have been a deleted scene like this. Brilliant work as always hun. |
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 28, 2015 18:23:00 GMT -4
thanks, my friend. *hugs*
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