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Post by obiamidala on Jun 3, 2010 21:35:55 GMT -4
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Post by Aravyn Kenobi on Jun 4, 2010 11:31:09 GMT -4
That was a beautiful story. I felt so sorry for Padme at times, her anxiety over being found out was palpable. Especially in regards to Anakin. I particularly enjoyed her fantasy about being in attendance at a galactic function, though. Very fun to imagine that happening.
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Post by Briseis on Jun 4, 2010 11:46:34 GMT -4
That was gorgeous!  I loved the Obidala moment at the Senate function.   |
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Post by danielle on Jun 4, 2010 11:47:54 GMT -4
Ooh lots of lovely fluff and passion to make me swoon and squee in delight. I love how you kept the suspense on the identity of Padme's husband, and the mention about the whispered messages during a public social.
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Post by dearben on Jun 4, 2010 11:52:42 GMT -4
I loved this!! ;D It was so beautiful! This is the kind of Obidala I crave!  And, the writing was so good. I felt like I was reading a Jane Austen novel about Obi-Wan and Padme. Great job! |
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Post by NoobianRose on Jun 4, 2010 12:03:44 GMT -4
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Your writing is beautiful. Her anxiety about her situation is palpable, but their love conquers all. Just as it should be. You write Padme so well. Wonderful story!
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Post by kenobifan on Jun 4, 2010 12:39:33 GMT -4
*pile of goo* That was absolutely filled with so much passion. I'm back in Obidala heaven where I want to stay! |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 4, 2010 19:01:21 GMT -4
I loved it! Great job!
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Post by raefinnscott on Jun 7, 2010 10:54:44 GMT -4
I love me some good Obidala fluff! That was very beautifully written! Loved it!!!
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I loved the Obidala moment at the Senate function. 
And, the writing was so good. I felt like I was reading a Jane Austen novel about Obi-Wan and Padme. 
